Living today is more comfortable and easier than when your grandparents were children

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2053.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44562334218 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.56489397694 2.67179642975 133% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596816976127 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 75.0 20.1344086022 372% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 437.007368359 48.9658058833 892% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 410.6 100.406767564 409% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 75.4 20.6045352989 366% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.0 5.45110844103 238% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 46.0 5.5376344086 831% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193706420062 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120622267344 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892435237293 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147059528938 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957877118517 0.0645574589148 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.9 11.7677419355 356% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -13.11 58.1214874552 -23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 6.10430107527 298% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.7 10.1575268817 332% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.51 10.9000537634 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.38 8.01818996416 154% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 10.002688172 315% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.0 10.0537634409 318% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 32.0 10.247311828 312% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.