Claim: An action is morally correct if the amount of good that results from the action is greater than the amount of bad that results from the action.
Reason: When assessing the morality of an action, the results of the action are more important than the intent of the person or people performing the action
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim AND the reason on which that claim is based.
In todays world doing something for someone has become a very difficult task. Very easily something that was intended to do good for someone can be interpreted in the wrong manner and instead of appreciating the person for trying to do something good they are blamed and looked down upon. I agree with the claim and the reason on which it is based and in my personal opinion the result it what matters.
Firstly, an action should never be judged and conculsions should never be drawn in the rudimentary stages of the action, they shoould give enough time for the action to show some kind of results before one can start scrutinizing the action and start finding flaws in it and thereby looking for a scapegoat to blame everything upon. This is not how the system should work, the action should be given enough time till it can show the planned results and then if it does not show results or at the end if there are more cons than pros one can blame the action rather than apreciating it. For example, a student who always use to be shy and had an introverted nature got really upset at his parents when they signed him up for acting class where he would have to perfrom on the stage in front of a live audience, he was so upset with his parents at first that he did not talk to them for a week and he hated them for this, but little did he know that today the reason he is appointed as the CEO of a company is because the action his parents took to remove his stage fear helped him get this job. The point here being is that the action should not be judged immediately but should be given enough time to show results.
Moving on, if someone performs some kind of an action which results in some kind of a positive results and benefits the people around it and even if the intent of the person performing the action would not have been absolutely justified still more impotance should be given to the outcome of the action rather than the intent of the person because at the end of the day what matters in what did the action yield and not what was the motivation or intent behind the person or group of people performing the action.
Furthermore, at the end of the day result is what makes all the difference and result is what matters more than anything. If an action is perfomed in completery good-will and the action is completely selfless but it does not yield positive results that there is no point of the absolutely selfless act. Therefore more importance should be given to the result than the intention and motive. For example, the goverment is planning on extending the metro line to decrease the number of private vehicles on the road which in turn will reduce the traffic and to do so they would have to cut off a land of trees. The point people our missing out here and protesting about it is that this will have a long term effect, number of cars on the road would decrease drastically therby cutting the citys pollution by half and to compensate for the cutting of trees the government is allocating funds to hold drives every month till the project is completed which in turn will led to plantation of four times the trees than the number of trees which were cut.Therefore the result this action will produce should be given more importance rather than the shortcome results.
In conclusion, what matters is the result and it should be given more priority than the intent/ motive of an action and an action should be give its intended time to run its course and produce its intended results and then if it does not do so or if the negative aspects of the action are more than the positive gains of it then the action should be looked down upon and deemed as a morally wrong action.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 359, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...e reason on which it is based and in my personal opinion the result it what matters. Firstly,...
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Line 3, column 620, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...g it. For example, a student who always use to be shy and had an introverted nature...
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Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'an' after a classification term. Use simply 'kind of'.
Suggestion: kind of
... Moving on, if someone performs some kind of an action which results in some kind of a ...
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Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'kind of'.
Suggestion: kind of
...kind of an action which results in some kind of a positive results and benefits the peopl...
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Line 7, column 304, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...o point of the absolutely selfless act. Therefore more importance should be given to the ...
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Line 7, column 964, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...project is completed which in turn will led to plantation of four times the trees t...
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Line 7, column 1046, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...than the number of trees which were cut.Therefore the result this action will produce sho...
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Line 7, column 1046, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...than the number of trees which were cut.Therefore the result this action will produce sho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, really, so, still, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 19.5258426966 189% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 12.4196629213 201% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 31.0 14.8657303371 209% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3031.0 2235.4752809 136% => OK
No of words: 682.0 442.535393258 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44428152493 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.11029644095 4.55969084622 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29301558401 2.79657885939 82% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.392961876833 0.4932671777 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 944.1 704.065955056 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 23.0359550562 208% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 162.50075353 60.3974514979 269% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 216.5 118.986275619 182% => OK
Words per sentence: 48.7142857143 23.4991977007 207% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 5.21951772744 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365643637082 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150798305787 0.0831039109588 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11523346834 0.0758088955206 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235018124614 0.150359130593 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104599523936 0.0667264976115 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.8 14.1392134831 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.68 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.6 12.1743820225 161% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.36 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.2 11.2143820225 189% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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