Science will soon make people live up 100 or even 200 years Some believe that this is a good thing while others disagree Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Due to significant science enhancement, it is predicted that humans tend to live longer than in the past, over 100 years or more. Some people assume that it cannot be considered an advantage, while others believe it may be so. In this essay, I will argue both views and propose my perspective in the following.
On the one hand, some people count several benefits of the long age that a human can live. To begin with, a couple of generation highly likely live together at the same time. This provides the opportunity for grandparents to see their grandchildren’s grandchildren. So this may be a fantastic event through the history of the families, and the elderly could transfer their experiences to the younger directly for several generations. Furthermore, it may lead to creating a high quality of life for the new generations.
On the other hand, some critics suppose that it will cause some difficulties for humankind; they think a growing population could be the primary problem that will be created. By these measures, the rate of fertility will be higher than that of death, and then the world would tend to associate with some drawbacks including lack of food resources as well as lack of productive employees, since a vast number of population will be elders, and they may not be able to work productively or be useful workforces. Besides, a significant amount of budget should be paid for their healthcare.
In conclusion, although it will be a great success for science to make humans age longer, I believe it will probably be that the longer humankind lives, the more difficulties will be created, the less productivity the population will make for societies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, may, so, then, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95053003534 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95526798449 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572438162544 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.7070710353 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.75 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177775960874 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709971329662 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529140390154 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129776871214 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743665035085 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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