University students must pay all tuition fees, because it benefits mostly them individually, rather than the society as a whole.
Do you agree or disagree?
Educational expenses in Higher Educational Institutes (HEIs) vary from country to country, self-financed to fully funded education. Many people think that the university education should be free whereas the others opine that government shouldn't support students since it is not going to get anything out of it. However, I belong to the earlier group because any service, a graduate provides, benefits the country at the end of the day.
Education, being classified as a basic need, is the responsibility of government. It benefits the state in implementing policies and laws because an educational society have a prescience of problems and their solutions in the long run. So, they usually don't resist towards harsh policies in tough times. Furthermore, more educational people provide a good team to grapple with the problems. Local scientists and researchers always impart low cost on the country while finding solutions of the local issues and understand them in far better way than the foreign experts. Jingoist engineers, doctors and scientist can work hard for their homeland and provide very economical and scintillating solutions of challenges to play their part in building a prosperous country. For example, Dr. Abdul Qadir Khan, a notable Pakistani nuclear scientist and founder of Pakistan's atomic program, was employed in Netherlands when Pakistan was defeated in 1971 war. He abandoned his bread and butter for Pakistan and founded nuclear program there and made his country first Islamic and seventh nuclear power globally. Otherwise, it was not possible to work on such program amid vigilant rival agencies.
This demands for very industrious and well-educated graduates from local HEIs. However, very high educational expenses hobble many mediocre and low-income families to provide higher education to their brilliant and on-merit children. This eventually pulls weak but rich students on top of the lists which yields very poor graduation cohorts. Many poor students, in such circumstances, try to earn their money with part-time jobs to pay their fees. It distracts them from their studies, and they are failed to present expected or required results.
It is evident from the above discussion that the local graduates benefit their homeland anyways. Even if they work abroad, they bring capital to their country. So, a state should provide at least subsidized higher education to its citizen. It will expedite the progress and grappling power of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, whereas, while, at least, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2100.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41237113402 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7977632154 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60824742268 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7104711535 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0648507773917 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0194757439297 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270517004654 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0398458265865 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165182496226 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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