Write about the following topic:
In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with
other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes
the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Old age is harsh reality of ones life. The person who is young now will definitely get old no matter when. During this time usually people often went to old age home to live the people of same age group where usually nurses look after them. Government sometimes spent money for there well being. Nowadays , a main question arise that who need to be responsible for this payment and i believe both government and family should pay half of the portion of this fees.
When a person was young. Government was the one who deduct taxes and some other deduction from there paycheck. Now the time, when they Can't work it is need to be their responsibility of their take care for some extent. For example:- every year both provincial and federal government takeaway at least 10 to 20 percent from a person salary in form of monthly and yearly taxes. So the person need to receive some benefit for his contribution for whole life during old age.
On the other hand, for whole life person works for their family for his kids, wife or even sometime for grand kids. Just to make their life easier. Sometimes, one also give all his hard earn saving to their kids just to make their future brighter. All life long hard work need to consider by family and have to take care of them during their end days.
In conclusion, I think a system need to be build where families Should responsible to contribute 50 percent of the total expenditure so as the government who need to be for rest of 50 percent. This system will not put burden totally on one side.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
Old age is harsh reality of ones life. The person who is young now will ...
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Line 1, column 305, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ent money for there well being. Nowadays , a main question arise that who need to ...
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Line 1, column 383, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... to be responsible for this payment and i believe both government and family shou...
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Line 1, column 454, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...amily should pay half of the portion of this fees. When a person was young. Gover...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ay half of the portion of this fees. When a person was young. Government was the ...
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Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: Can't; Cannot
...there paycheck. Now the time, when they Cant work it is need to be their responsibil...
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Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... build where families Should responsible to contribute 50 percent of the total ex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, at least, even so, for example, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51428571429 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27292116916 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564285714286 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.3333153736 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308503687413 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943404916286 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657540411759 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184811846101 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11086196603 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.