In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
Youngers of some cities are not allowed to roam by their own for a particular time duration and it is I beleive a rtional measure in order to prevent any undesirable incident happen to teenagers. There are areas, where it is advisable to remain in house in late hours because of the presense of unethical and non social mindset people who could trap or harm young growns. In my opinion, this is very wise and resasonable step as it is for the good of young people, "the precious assest of the country".
At first place, teenagers are amature and they don't have that much ability to judge people and understand which is good or bad for them. They are relatively prone to trapped in net of criminal or unlawful people and eventually land in a serious trouble. These predatures are always looking for youngrs as they find them easy target and they don't have to put much time or effort in order to influence them or harm them. Many surveys and reports has indicated that teen aged population becomes the victims of abuse or addiction in late hours especially when they are all alone.
Furthermore, when adolescents are with their guardians or partents the chances of them to be approached by criminals are very less or zero. That is why in case of unavoidable circumstance, if they have to go out and they are accompanied by a senior they can be protected from such huaman evils. In addition to safety parents can give useful advices to their children about how to assess the people and identify the potential risk.
Neverthless, confined teenagers to house or bound them with a companion may seen violation of their right of freedom at first glance but it is necessary for their own safety and better future. In my opinion, it is a justified regulation, However, administration should also focus on more towards eliminate such crminals so that such curfews could be eradicated.
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...t place, teenagers are amature and they dont have that much ability to judge people ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... as they find them easy target and they dont have to put much time or effort in orde...
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Message: Did you mean 'see' or 'be seen'?
Suggestion: see; be seen
...ouse or bound them with a companion may seen violation of their right of freedom at ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75609756098 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68773820244 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582317073171 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 23.0500662809 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 130.0 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159778615682 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524228166387 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048658308722 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859708937558 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225635399219 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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