In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that excessively consuming fast food leading to many health problems is one of the major issues in some nations. This essay agrees that higher tax on junk food should be imposed as such policy will generate some revenue to help people having diseases and higher price of this kind of food will prevent people to consume it regularly.
The money taken from the higher tax imposed on fast food industry can be utilised to help people who are suffering from diseases caused by fast food. For example, the UK’s government makes people to pay more for alcoholic drinks and tobacos, and it has proven to be effective to curb the consumption of these harmful products including fast food. Governments can even use this outgoings to run advertising campaigns to educate people about the risks of smoking and using alcoholic products as well.
By increasing the price of fast food, authorities can lower the consumption of this kind of food. When higher taxes are imposed on fast food industry, restaurants selling junk food must increase their prices of their products, making it exorbitant. Eventually, fast-food consumers will see it as a costly, luxury product and they will pick up another option for meals which is more cost effective. Take Vietnam for example, the products’ prices of fast food giants namely, KFC, McDonald are much more expensive compared to street food or home cooked food. Therefore, Vietnamese ocasionally eat fast food and health problems caused by this kind of food have never been an issue in this country.
In conclusion, imposing higher tax on fast food companies is vital because it seems to me that this scheme will improve people’s health and help people having severe diseases to mitigate their burdens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Line 3, column 488, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (McDonald) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
... fast food giants namely, KFC, McDonald are much more expensive compared to street ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01369863014 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50611936375 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551369863014 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.3972899182 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.090909091 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5454545455 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433029355489 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190915912818 0.084324248473 226% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729945929092 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277202070756 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513689863575 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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