Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be
enjoyable.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
For centuries, hobbies have been an indispensable part of our daily life routine. It plays a pivotal role in creating a connection at a spiritual, physical, and mental level. However, views on the nature of pastime activities vary to a greater extent. As some people believe that hobbies should be adventures, and challenging to have real fun, however, a few oppose this idea in the favor of more comforting and calming activities. I personally believe that it is highly close to heart matter and everyone should be flexible in choosing one based on personal choice and time.
To begin with, it is an irrefutable fact that the free-time activities are meant to mitigate the overwhelmed after-effects of a hectic and challenging life. To overcome these increasing stress-levels and enervate feelings, an individual is accountable to stimulate their suppressed energy-levels by following a healthy dose of hobbies. It is often agreed that indulging in light-hearted hobbies such as music, meditation, sports, etc not only enhances productivity but also lifts mood and energy. For instance, many studies have revealed that light hobbies are extremely useful in improving mental and physical health.
On the other hand, it will be erroneous to believe that one should always go with less-intense hobbies. In certain scenarios, people follow some out of the box hobbies in which they want to pursue their career. For example, a few intentionally dive into dangerous activities such as skiing, weight lifting, boxing, car-racing, etc in the hope to expand their vocational opportunities. Besides this, some love to challenge themselves by exploring more risk-driven activities to expand their horizon.
To conclude, although the definition of a hobby differs from person to person, in my opinion, irrespective of its nature, one should follow it on a regular basis. Besides providing pleasure, hobbies are synonymous with the holistic development of our body and mind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37419354839 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06475381082 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61935483871 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1580558178 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.066666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173467387899 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526232964867 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527688275954 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972186986982 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576293923385 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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