keeping old friends
In this modern era, friends play a pivotal role in everyone's daily life. Having a good friendship renders so many beneficial consequences that have a positive influence on individuals. The question which arises here is whether it is momentum to keep your old friends or enlarge your friend circle by making new ones. Some people hold the view that keeping old friends is crucial for your life activities while others have the opposite opinion. I contend that it is vital to keep our old friends rather than making new ones. In what follows I would elaborate on my viewpoint by mentioning two main reasons.
The first remarkable reason to be indicated is that old friends are usually so faithful. You can count on them while you run into problems and they would try their best to lend you a hand. Take myself as an example, I confronted difficulty in paying my bills and I asked my old friend and I could borrow some cash to pay it back later. Therefore, when you have some old friends you won't get anxious whenever you face problems and relying on your best friends would boost your self-confidence. On the other hand, new friends can't trust you in order to endow you with money.
The second reason which deserves words here is that you have more common activities and hobbies to do with your old friends rather than friends who you don't know much about their characteristics and favorite things to do with. For instance, when you plan an entertainment work for the weekend it is much easier to schedule it with your old friends as you know their attributes. Besides, you have experienced so much time with your old friends and as a result, you have so many mutual tasks to do together and killing time by talking about your old memories.
To wrap it up, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to conclude that conserving your old friends is much more essential than spending so much time finding new ones. In addition, it is recommended to be in touch with your old friends in order to feel refresh and increase your self-esteem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 524, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...fidence. On the other hand, new friends cant trust you in order to endow you with mo...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...old friends rather than friends who you dont know much about their characteristics a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, talking about, you know, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65555555556 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57207222985 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513888888889 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8889902003 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.75 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403902049377 0.236089414692 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168037264935 0.076458572812 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118532762392 0.0737576698707 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271490381472 0.150856017488 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0946654520327 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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