Working alone or as a group

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Working alone or as a group

Although I deeply appreciate my solitude while I am brainstorming on an idea, in case of doing a school assignment or project I undoubtedly prefer to be part of team. In the following paragraphs I am trying to explain my point of view.

The most prominent benefit of team work is reduced probability of errors. School assignments are supposed to be a mean of evaluation. Therefore, the more precise and flawless the work is, the higher the designated grade will be. A group of people can share different views with each other, which will lead to the progressive correction of their ideas via the brainstorming phase. I remember a physics project on different types of electrical circuits that my friends and I together were working on it. I designed part of the panels and connected components of one of the circuits on the blue print in a completely wrong way. It was my teammate that noticed the error.

Moreover, a bunch of people who works together in an organized and orderly manner will be blessed with less time and effort spending, than those who work alone. Referring the above example, our project could be executed with a high price if it was not for the presence of one of our classmates in the team. She had an uncle who was very handy with electrical devices and had a pile of broken and useless stuffs. We used many parts of those wrecked things instead of buying brand new items. In addition, he himself helped us a lot by hinting which shortcuts we could use. Our project was accomplished before the due date with a price much lower than was predicted at the beginning.

Finally, working in a group is a pleasure. School assignments are such a burden that feel like endless efforts. On the other hand, a team of friends who are cooperating in order to accomplish a task is a huge energizer. I never felt bored or stuck when I was part of a group, working on difficult projects. We played music, made jokes, and even played games in break times. Actually, the entire time we assigned to our work seemed like a friendly party that we all were enjoying it.

To cut the long story short, I believe that students should do teamwork to accomplish their projects and assignments. It helps them to obtain high grades, work rather efficiently, and have much fun.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65099009901 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67736553303 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566831683168 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6859526597 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6956521739 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5652173913 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69565217391 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176513681271 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573837248221 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962801872345 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951751156738 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07383398596 0.0645574589148 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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