Some people believe that students should be given one long vacation each year. Others believe that students should have several short vacations throughout the year. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Vacation brings immense pleasure to everyone's life. Although some people believe that a long vacation is more preferred to a small one. However, I think that it is always beneficial for students to have multiple short vacations throughout the year. I firmly believe this way owing to a number of reasons and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with,a student's life is one of the most charming periods of our entire span of life. However, students usually have to undergo an extremely hectic routine which comprises daily classes, a lot of assignments and as a result, they usually don't get much time to relax. Furthermore, according to the curriculum, they have to face a large number of short class tests and two semester wise final exams throughout a year. Sometimes it's become utmost important to have a small break after each exam so that they can concentrate on their studies fully. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter is profoundly inspired by my own personal experience. You see, during my school days, I used to get only 2 vacations after every final exams in a year. But I used to feel so tired giving a lot of short tests that sometimes, I wasn't able to secure good marks as it comes close to my final days. As a result, unfortunately, it hampered my final semester exam. For this reason, I think that if I would have gotten a few short vacations, I could have planned for short trips and that would have helped me to better concentrate on my studies.
Secondly, during short vacation students can plan for a short excursion with their fellow classmates which in turn will help them to increase their knowledge apart from a mere refreshment. Drawing from my own experience, my brother used to get multiple short vacations every 2 month and during this time, he and his friends used to develop various science models. I remember, one of the models they had built also won first prize in a model making competition. Furthermore, short vacation always has the following big advantage over a long one. Some it happens that with a single longer vacation, students occasionally plan for a long trip with their family and hence they get detached from their studies for a longer time. As a result, they aren't able to concentrate when they resume again. Therefore, it is certainly clear to see that If I were asked, I would definitely vote for multiple short vacations.
In light of the above mentioned passages, I strongly believe that several short vacations throughout the year would be always fruitful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, apart from, i think, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2122.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 443.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79006772009 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64156195624 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516930022573 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 668.7 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0587765192 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.047619048 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0952380952 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2380952381 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293408543521 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905286813202 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744203682516 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219798354518 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651801221719 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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