Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, No one can casts doubt on the choosing a appropriate career has paramount significance in the future of person, and the consultancy of employment achievement is recently becoming quite trendy among societies. It is my empathetic belief that in the past it was more comfortable to recognize what kind of career or jobs would make to a secure, successful future. If I were asked to determine a couple of reasons standing behind my points of view, I would strongly suggest the lower capacity of career, more competitiveness, and growth in population number leads to a difficulty to reaching a career at now.
I will manifest my reasons in the subsequent paragraphs.
without an adumbration of doubt the technology has been eased to access to the diversity of resource about how to find a job, being a high quality employee notwithstanding, it is no quarantine to getting a career or job. the career finding seems more difficult to achieve recently; however, there are a more path to secure a successful future; due to increasing of population of countries and migration rates, the capacity of jobs became lower, thereby becoming more competitiveness pool applicant for jobs. My personal experience is the compelling evidence for what I mean; when I applied abroad to study, there was almost one hundred applicant from all over the world, my success chance to accept was one percent; therefore, I decided to try other universities to enhance my chance.
It also goes without declaring that the job diversity limitation in the past made individuals to identify whatever they wanted swiftly. not only assigned they less time to search occupations, but can they find more suitable works title. to be more specific, when my parent decided to choice a job, they had several option in their hands without apprehension , and worriedness. it has not enough job opportunity now. rather, a person should make his or her own jobs by himself or herself.
It can be summed up by accentuating that the more successful future demands the more inquiry to jobs pools and opportunity in recent times. I agree with the idea that In the last millennia it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future. whether or not accept this idea, with the passing time; the technology and the population number rocketing up, find secure job will be arduous effort for the next generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'cast'
Suggestion: cast
Nowadays, No one can casts doubt on the choosing a appropriate car...
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Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... No one can casts doubt on the choosing a appropriate career has paramount signif...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Without
...sons in the subsequent paragraphs. without an adumbration of doubt the technology ...
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Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... quarantine to getting a career or job. the career finding seems more difficult to ...
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Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'paths'?
Suggestion: paths
...eve recently; however, there are a more path to secure a successful future; due to i...
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Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Not
... identify whatever they wanted swiftly. not only assigned they less time to search...
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Line 7, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y wanted swiftly. not only assigned they less time to search occupations, but can...
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Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...an they find more suitable works title. to be more specific, when my parent decide...
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Line 7, column 309, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun option seems to be countable; consider using: 'several options'.
Suggestion: several options
...arent decided to choice a job, they had several option in their hands without apprehension , a...
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Line 7, column 359, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tion in their hands without apprehension , and worriedness. it has not enough job ...
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Line 7, column 379, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...without apprehension , and worriedness. it has not enough job opportunity now. rat...
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Line 7, column 418, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Rather
... it has not enough job opportunity now. rather, a person should make his or her own jo...
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Line 9, column 189, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...with the idea that In the last millennia it was easier to identify what type of c...
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Line 9, column 287, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whether
...ld lead to a secure, successful future. whether or not accept this idea, with the passi...
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Line 9, column 287, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...ld lead to a secure, successful future. whether or not accept this idea, with the passing time...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, i mean, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2015.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97530864198 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93132941348 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550617283951 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.0683168133 48.9658058833 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.333333333 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236721347644 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868212231793 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935072182004 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132201015599 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809187414046 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.