Internet
We are living in a complex, demanding world. Technology has advanced so much, and Internet is one of the most astonishing blessings of technology. Some people think that governments should spend more effort on other needs of their citizens instead of Internet. On the other hand, I do agree that governments should equally work to make this amazing facility free of cost for citizens for the following reasons which I will explain in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, I believe that the Internet has numerous benefits. No one can deny the importance of the Internet in this fast-growing world. Internet is playing a significant role in business, education, and telecommunication. Amazon is an online form of business which anyone can do from home. All you need is just an Internet connection. For example, my uncle is earning handsome amount of money by doing this online business. He is running this business by sitting one place, and buying, and selling products all over the world. Internet is the key ingredient in the success of this business. Moreover, our educational system is totally based on the Internet these days. Most of the classes are conducting online, and we just need an internet connection and computer. My own example is here. I took an online language course last month for my Toefl exam without going anywhere. we can also do research on Internet. For instance, Google is a search engine which we can use for our research purposes. This demonstrates that Internet has made our lives very easy, and governments should focus to promote this facility.
Secondly, Internet made this world a global village. We can connect to our loved ones from any corner of this world. For example, people are using whatsapp, skype, and facetime to talk to their families who live far away. Without Internet, no one can use these services. Furthermore, smart phones, Ipads, and laptops are the devices which can only be useful in the presence of Internet. Therefore, Internet is becoming the basic necessity of our lives which is equally important like building roads or hospitals. That`s why Governments should put extra effort to make this facility free of cost which will definitely ease citizens lives .
In conclusion, although some may disagree, I personally feel that Internet is the basic need of our society. Governments can encourage businesses, education, and other fields by providing Internet access easy and free of cost for everyone.
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- Integrated essay whales use navigating techniques for migration and mating purpose 60
- Some people believe that playing video or mobile games has no benefits at all for your children while others think it can be a good hobby Which one do you agree with and why Use details and examples to support your answer 85
- Independent essay 3
- Summarize the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made in the reading passage 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08620689655 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78501201406 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527093596059 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1988555462 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.75 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17857142857 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392992309018 0.236089414692 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146315385892 0.076458572812 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122248974374 0.0737576698707 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270383286458 0.150856017488 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695111095044 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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