some say that it is good for children to stay away from the Families and go to boarding school others say that children have better live with their families and attend a day school. discuss
There are various way to educate a child, such as: send them to a boarding school, let them attend a day school. some people insist that boarding school is good for children while others disagree with this view. The question is which one is better for kids. I believe each one has its own benefits.
To start with, let’s discuss about boarding school’s advantages. Firstly, children who go to boarding school have to do almost everything on their own, which make them become more independent and have responsibility for things they did. Next, for a kid, being away from parents sometimes means freedom. There’s no one to boss them, make them do homework or housework. Besides, no parents can prevents some unnecessary arguments. Further more, boarding school create stronger relationships. In other words, children can live with their friends. They will share things, places, stories,... That could be a little annoyed, but after all it still worth it.
What about a day school? This is where children go to study for a couple hour and then back home. Obviously, when kids are with their families, they will be taught not only at school but by parents too. They can feel love and be take care of, and don’t have to suffer from homesickness. Parents will hold their hand through the stressful process. And for those families struggling with financial problems, day school is absolutely a better choice, to compare with.
Choosing the right educational path for children has never been easy. It’s depends on both parents and children to decide what should be the best for their future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, so, still, then, while, after all, such as, in other words, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97388059701 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50516007904 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649253731343 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0370392216 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.4761904762 106.682146367 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.7619047619 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90476190476 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430069712622 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112842086093 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893015092098 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250629456517 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626881036951 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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