The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Currently there is a contentious argument over whether the advantages of using social media outweight the disadvantages. I agree that the advantages of using social media outweight the disadvantages. In this essay I will discuss the benefits of using social media and why is it essential.
Beyond any qualms there are myriads of logical reasons that prove that social media is beneficial for the society. The future of education lies in the hands of social-media interaction. Face to face interaction of teachers has become a thing of past in most of the developed countries. For instance, irrespective of the location of a student in any country that student can easily access quality education of his choice by attening online lectures from any top university. Moreover, during this pandemic situation social media proved to be even more useful tool. All the school children were able to attend their classes online and all the corporate jobs remained afloat due to the power of social media.
On the contrary, some people believe that the social media is replacing face to face interaction and thus people feel more lonely when they do not get to meet their family and friends. Some people argue that social media is opening a virtual world for the teenagers who get entrapped in the fake world and end up in depression and isolation. While, these factors cannot to overlooked but I still believe that benefits are more when we see the ease of our day to day life where everything can be done on the click of a button.
In conclusion, I believe that social media proved to be a useful tool to keep the jobs running and prevent the schools from complete shutdown during this testing times of Covid-19. It not only prevented depression in children but it also prevented many firms from going bankrupt amidst the lockdown. Will it continue to be beneficial in future? Still remains a question.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vantages of using social media outweight the disadvantages. In this essay I will ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, still, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9099378882 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67015917309 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531055900621 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.424816641 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8125 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298706610238 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974709701081 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898081766658 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169758165504 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607854442991 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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