Some high schools have a requirement that students must complete a certain amount of volunteer work in order to graduate. What do you think about this type of requirement? Give details to support your opinion.
In the modern day, accomplishing a moderate amount of volunteer work is bit by bit considered to be one of the most important things in order to allow students graduate. To the best of my knowledge, there are still a mixed variety of reasons both for and against this policy. However, beyond its drawbacks, I fully endorse with this kind of judging those who was in high schools.
On the one hand, attending in a voluntary project give you numerous opportunities to gain experiences, bringing about the development of social skills on the basis of the position that you have. Taking a charity project for example, if you are one of the project's president, you will have a number of chances to acquire management skills and the ability to tackle difficulty. Apart from this aforementioned reason, volunteer work is also tended to give students a wide range of fame. Effectively, most students have a strong desire to be high-profile about what they have contributed to the society, which, in my opinion, is one of the main reasons making them strive for doing volunteer works.
On the other hand, some students consider volunteer work as a waste of time. They suppose that it can lead to the serious negligence in their study and subsequently affect their future. Moreover, most students find it hard to do the volunteer work in the proper way. Suffering from the social criticism has a tendency to occur with a high frequency just because of your incautious action, resulting in an increase in the number of students who object this requirement.
In conclusion, after analysing carefully, I have a great belief that the benefits of this requirement outweigh the drawbacks. The more our attempt to complete volunteer works, the brighter our community's future will become.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 255, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'projects'' or 'project's'?
Suggestion: projects'; project's
...ject for example, if you are one of the projects president, you will have a number of ch...
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Line 2, column 432, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aforementioned reason, volunteer work is also tended to give students a wide rang...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, apart from, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96621621622 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83864209968 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584459459459 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6238885363 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.076923077 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316371152432 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962129915247 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523042079985 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158836575302 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425162399194 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.