You are organising a trip for group of 4 friends. You have found some accommodation which you quite like
Write to the manager of the accommodation , in letter
Explain when you want to visit the accommodation
Tell the manager the reason for your visit
Ask about the facilities of the accommodation
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Lima, writing this letter to inquiries about the availability of accommodation and facilities or activities provided by your hotel in Goa branch.
Me along with my 3 friends planning to have a trip this December Christmas holidays to Goa. I found that your hotel Harris is one of the best service hotel in Goa “beach view villa resort”. I want to know the availability of the 4 beach view rooms for 4 days from 23 Dec till 25 Dec. We are going to plan to celebrate this year's Christmas in the resort in a fun way.
Last year one of my friends told me your resort has many activities at the time of Christmas and New year celebration. Thus, could you please help to provide more detailed information regarding this year's Christmas celebration activities, any additional facilities available in your resort to have some relax and chill time with my friends?
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convince.
Yours Sincerely,
Lima
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/ Madam, I am Lima, writing this letter to inquir...
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Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a fun way" with adverb for "fun"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...rate this years Christmas in the resort in a fun way. Last year one of my friends told me y...
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Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r earliest convince. Yours Sincerely, Lima
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, regarding, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76470588235 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76698279207 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0194129601 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158908444747 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632776493294 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040414453786 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101994674802 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217151363272 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.