Your friend is about to move into a new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• offer to help him/her to move
• explain how exactly you can help
• ask him/her some questions about the new house
Hi Nikki,
how are you doing? Hope this email finds you good. It’s been a long time since we last were in touch but, I haven’t forgotten all the wonderful times we spent together last year. I am writing this letter to know more details
about your shifting to a new house.
As you said you are planning to move on the coming weekend. As I have a holiday on Saturday and Sunday so I can help you to move the luggage. From Friday you started packing things hence, My wife said she will pack breakfast and lunch I will bring while coming to your old flat. After eating breakfast you can go and do the prayer at the new flat in parallel I will finish packing and move to the grab lorry.
Share with me the new flat address so I will check any of my colleagues are near to your new place can help us to find the cleaning maid and security guard. Take care, waiting for your reply. Convey my wishes to aunty and uncle.
Best wishes,
Lima
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... about your shifting to a new house. As you said you are planning to move on th...
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Line 8, column 104, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help us find' instead.
Suggestion: help us find
...lleagues are near to your new place can help us to find the cleaning maid and security guard. T...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28729281768 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.00588250011 2.54303337028 79% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646408839779 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.390224027 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.6666666667 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252529401888 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839874875278 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715258971998 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165768787375 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739275793 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.01 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.