The graph below gives information about the preferred leisure activities of Australian children.
The bar graph elicits percentage of Australian children aged between 5 and 14 relishing 5 different activities in their spare time.
Out of all the activities cent percent of the Australian kids are fond of watching television or videos in their free time. In addition the second most popular activity attracting 80% of the boys and 60% of the girls is playing electronic or Computer aided games. Following, bike riding is also among-st one of the favorite sports selected by the children (75% of the boys and 58% of girls). However, this proportion is a bit lesser in comparison to virtual gaming.Crafting and skateboarding are amongst the least preferred fun time activities by the children in Australia.In spite of this being the fact about 58% girls are interested in working on arts but, this proportion is 50% less when it comes to boys.
Overall, it can be reported that television and video watching is at the top priority when it comes to entertainment while, skateboarding or rollerblading is ranked at the bottom of the leisure time activity list by Australian kids
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'activities'' or 'activity's'?
Suggestion: activities'; activity's
... in their spare time. Out of all the activities cent percent of the Australian kids are...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...vision or videos in their free time. In addition the second most popular activity attrac...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Crafting
... lesser in comparison to virtual gaming.Crafting and skateboarding are amongst the least...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...activities by the children in Australia.In spite of this being the fact about 58% ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, while, in addition, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97237569061 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9936085676 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602209944751 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.9986681766 43.030603864 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.0 112.824112599 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1666666667 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 5.23603664747 213% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223891604331 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982941075442 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519684935991 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150278770237 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388095601889 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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