Human activity has had a negative effect on ecosystems, animals and plants across the world. Some people believe this cannot be changed while others feel we can still take action to protect living things. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Some people believe that the negative impact of our activities on the environment and animals can not be changed whilst others believe we have the power to make a difference. In this essay will discuss both sides of this statement and will give my opinion on the topic. Firstly, I will discuss why people think they can't help the world and secondly, I will explore the effects of technology and recycling on environmental issues.
Many people think that they can not help with environmental issues due to the current economic status. Going green and using more eco-friendly materials on manufacturing is more expensive than using regular materials which makes end products' cost higher. Therefore consumers choose to use cheaper products without considering the consequences of their actions.
On the other hand, many people think we can still help the environment using technology such as electronic cars. Carbon emission is a severe problem caused by the consumption of fossil fuels such as oil and gas which we use in our cars. For example, if we use electronic cars, we would use fewer fossil fuels hence there would be less carbon emission. Also, recycling is a great way to help the environment. For instance, after Turkey's new recycling rules the pollution in the country decrease drastically.
We can see that there are many challenges we are facing in our modern world. But I believe we should always take care of our world and governments worldwide should take action in this matter.
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| 2021-04-21 | Firdouspathan | 78 | view |
| 2020-12-16 | gigigns | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 317, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...y, I will discuss why people think they cant help the world and secondly, I will ex...
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Line 1, column 350, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...k they cant help the world and secondly, I will explore the effects of technology...
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Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...s which makes end products cost higher. Therefore consumers choose to use cheaper product...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03212851406 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71241067291 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578313253012 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5920745061 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3846153846 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250502523682 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845078017096 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861100857721 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151714015529 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111006681165 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.