You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter,
explain why you have moved
describe the new house
invite your friend to come and visit
You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter,
explain why you have moved
describe the new house
invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Kyna,
It's been a long since we wrote to each other, I hope you are in the pink of your health; I am also doing well. I am writing to express my excitement to move into a new house, as you know I and my family always wanted to leave that crowded city and finally the moment is here. Also, I would like to invite you to my new home.
Toronto Downtown, Canada, the place where we used to live, was over congested, full of skyscrapers; therefore, we used to feel suffocated, which made us look for another place. Now that I got a job in Calgary, Alberta, so we all moved here.
Calgary is not only airy and spacious but also more secure than Toronto. Also, the house is big with a backyard which makes it all the more beautiful. The infrastructure of the house is magnificent and I would recommend you to visit here for your holidays, we will have great fun together.
Let me know about your plans when should I expect you, Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Warm regards,
Yachika Sharma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, so, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46606334842 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45518377237 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638009049774 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8865064416 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.25 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.487345388999 0.216113520407 226% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163429104384 0.0766984524023 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165957341943 0.0603063233224 275% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26573530816 0.12726935374 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145731753552 0.0580467560999 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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