Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. Do you agree or disagree?
We cannot deny that, music plays a crucial role in people living and it is also the main aspect of human existence. As it is true that, music is the key distinguisher of culture, while it also play the role of bridge for cultural gap and ages differences. I agree with the statement and this essay will examine the arguments in the favor of topic.
To begin with, music is the universal language to connect the people from different part of the world. However, people can share feeling of happiness, sorrow, emotions with the help of the music. Language does not matter in understanding the feeling of music. For instance, in the recent survey done by Uk, people were asked to listen small clips of songs from different languages to identify the purpose of songs, whether it was love song, dance song or any others. Mostly people choose correctly, despite the songs are from foreign language.
However, music can be helpful to the introvert people, who cannot communicate easily with people. It can be helpful to them to share their feeling.
Furthermore, music help to bring people of any ages in connection with the help of different events. They can get chances to interact with each other during various kind of music events and memories of special events are unforgettable.
In addition, music help to recognize the culture and tradition of particular place and area to all over the world. It is also vital means to convey any important message to the people of the world. For example, the one songs of Michael Jackson, which is based on humanity and abuse, has been seen more than 20 million times on Youtube. Similarly, despite of knowing language and meaning, Nepali song “Resham Firiri” is undoubtly in every foreigner lips who now about Nepal.
To conclude, music taste can be vary from person to person, while we cannot deny the significant of music, bringing people together from different part of the world and ages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es of special events are unforgettable. In addition, music help to recognize the...
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Line 9, column 216, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one song', 'a song', or simply 'songs'?
Suggestion: one song; a song; songs
...e people of the world. For example, the one songs of Michael Jackson, which is based on h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, similarly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88253012048 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48794998395 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557228915663 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5351140818 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3529411765 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5294117647 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241711185504 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815184370604 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662016152956 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125703666124 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599882369934 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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