Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another.
It goes without saying that a place in which one lives plays a pivotal role in one's life due to the fact that it has a direct impact not only on one's communication but also on one's personality. Some people believe that any individual should live in one city in their whole life, others believe one should live in different places. Although both ideas have some advantages and disadvantages, I, personally, subscribe to the latter idea. There are quite a few reasons that can support this idea, two of which - that is - getting familiar with different cultures and making new job opportunities are elaborate upon hereunder.
First, moving from one place to another one causes one getting familiar with other cultures and background, which help people understand the difference between people’s opinion and background. Moreover, in this situation, one can make more friends, who have different backgrounds, compared to one who just lives in one place. I believe that any individual in their life should try to visit as many as possible places and live with a variety of cultures to increase their knowledge about everything. However, some people do not like such a nomadic lifestyle in that they prefer to live in one place in their whole life. By so doing, they can make some long-lasting relations and deep friends. Choosing the lifestyle is dependent upon one's personality. While some people prefer to live in one place in which they are familiar with many communications with all its drawbacks, other people, including me, like nomadic lifestyle and getting familiar with a variety of languages, cultures, foods, or traditions. By and large, the more places a person live, the more culture he or she might know.
Second, one of the most important reasons for emigrating can be finding a job. Moving to another place can make many job opportunities for people because in one place there are limited job positions. Some people prefer to do a carrier just they love, others like to find a carrier in a particular place, which depends on one's priority. I, personally, believe that people, the priority of which is living a particular place for whole life, deprive themselves of doing whatever they love. However, living in one place for the whole life can pave the way for a family business, which is an invaluable asset for each member of the family. A person, who lives in an underdeveloped country, for instance, and whose favorite job is in the technology area, like to live in their home country, they cannot be a successful person due to lack of sufficient facilities such as high-quality Internet and cutting-edge equipment. Whereas, if he or she emigrates to a state-of-the-art country in technology area can improve their skills and knowledge so as meet their desire, which is so life-and-death decision. Therefore, they would be a successful person in their carrier life. In a word, for finding interesting occupy one should pay the cost by emigration.
In conclusion, taking the aforementioned reasons and examples into account, both approaches have many privileges. However, the benefits of living in different places outweigh those of living in one place. By and large, to get familiar with different cultures and to provide new job opportunities, one should open about changes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2755.0 1977.66487455 139% => OK
No of words: 546.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04578754579 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83390555256 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88052806366 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446886446886 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 898.2 618.680645161 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1994062592 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.791666667 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314047408032 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106799394812 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783829189868 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219524331555 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562374073858 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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