Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others believe that they cannot always expect job satisfaction, and a permanent job is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about whether job fulfillment or job security should be emphasized when choosing a job. While stability at work plays an important role, I consider feeling satisfied with employment should be given precedence over it.
On the one hand, job security brings employees many benefits. First, they can earn attractive salaries parallel to exclusive benefit packages. All of these things ensure a comfortable life for themselves and their families even if they retire. Moreover, nowadays, the job market can be defined as fierce competition. Specifically, with the workforce reduction in many firms annually, especially with the pressure COVID-19 pandemic on the economy and society, workers only prioritize how to keep away from unemployment instead of finding an ideal job.
On the other hand, it is justifiable for employees to change their job since they desire to find their real career passion which is integral to job satisfaction. First of all, a satisfied employee is not just a retained one but an ambassador for the company, internally and externally. In other words, the more they feel fulfilled with their work, the more they are willing to go the extra mile to achieve goals and dedicate their lives to the job. Furthermore, as the single activity occupying most people’s waking time, work also plays an important role in their health status. It is scientifically proven that long-term pressure or work strains can lead to a decrease in physical and mental health.
In conclusion, it is impossible to say whether job satisfaction or job security is more important since it is the goal of an individual. However, while having a permanent job is considerable, we should seek one that makes us feel motivated to dedicate for.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17482517483 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89913911012 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5962125434 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.714285714 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340304055854 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118197291889 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107503037264 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229832760235 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730460680762 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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