Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Today, some parts of the community hold the belief that decreasing number of particular species of plants and animals are the critical environmental issue, yet others argue that despite the decreasing number, there are other serious issues are occurring in human. It is true that global warming and environmental pollution is becoming a life-threatening danger in recent years not only affecting in flora and fauna but also, it is the human who is in danger of survival.
Ecosystem sustainability is related to many parts including from small inspects to giant elephants and all together invests a certain role. However, due to the environmental issues namely global warming, some species population has decreased or even extinction has been occurring in the last few decades. For example, In Mongolia, the population of the “mazaalai bear” known as gobi-bear has a role of eating certain plants that prevent from desertification, are decreasing and counting less than ten.
On the other hand, there are hundreds of predictions about the elimination of the basic three elements (air, water, and food) of human survival only in ten decades which are mostly related to environmental pollution, global warming, and living organism extinction. The most known example is freshwater insufficiency comparing to the overall population. It is said by some scientists that counting numbers of lakes and rivers with fresh water has declined by a large amount in recent years which proving the brutal statement of danger in human survival.
In conclusion, ecosystem sustainability relied on plants and animal are becoming a critical issue but human survival is another serious issue we are facing today. Therefore, some justification and prevention for living organisms should be taken by society to sustain longer periods in the earth's planet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 289, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'earths'' or 'earth's'?
Suggestion: earths'; earth's
...ociety to sustain longer periods in the earths planet.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38888888889 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99330528734 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569444444444 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.4515014084 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.2 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121387847365 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451903550605 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475614396993 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0739670568505 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420819461709 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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