In some countries young people are not only richer, but also safer and healthier than ever before. However, they are often less happy. What do you think are the reasons for this and what can be done to help?
In general opinion, wealthy people in many developed countries that tended to associated with a level of happiness and satisfaction. There are some problems why rich people cannot be happy that the writer will explain in this essay and show a few of solutions where relevant.
Some matters lead to many wealthy people cannot enjoy happiness in their lives, even all of the things have stayed beside them. Firstly, competitive behaviour has made a gap among rich people, where they are feeling disappointed when working to collect much money cannot be surpassing other people. For instance, a parent who gets feeling less responsibility because that cannot fulfil a level of well-being for their family over than neighbour. Secondly, wealthy men are working in all the time, as a result, because of high responsibility in the office so they do not have time to enjoy life. Finally, hard-working to collect much money by ignoring leisure time with family is the part of an issue that affected the happiness goes away.
On the other side, I believe that time management and spending part of our free time with family is one of the solutions to discuss the happiness issue, where people can do everything with family, enjoying the quality time together like dinner in outside, sharing and keep in touch each other. Furthermore, trying to open interaction with other people is also the best way to made relation and showing that we are part of society.
In conclusion, I argue that enjoying leisure time with family and making good relation with others is the best way to handle the issue of less happy to the wealthy people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 86, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ot enjoy happiness in their lives, even all of the things have stayed beside them. Firstly...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in general, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90545454545 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56994967311 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.1579895576 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.9 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142123237476 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062797362005 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305157092292 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897417998242 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387243601611 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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