You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course.
You now find that you cannot continue the course.
Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter
describe the situation
explain why you cannot continue at this time
say what action you would like to take
Dear Mr. James,
I am student of your IELTS class which is onsite part-time evening course. I am writing to inform you regarding my work situation. As you know, I work for a global IT company. I have assigned important project and my company demands me to move to China end of this month for a few months or more. I have to comply their demands. Due to my moving to abroad, I could not to continue my education class for a while. Completing this class have a crucial importance for my English skills. However, the completing of the course seems impossible for this year.
Hence, if possible, I would like to attend to another IELTS class at next semester. Due to finishing my project, I will be able to more focus to my improving English Skill.
Thanks in advance for your cooperation. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Omer Otcu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
...on. As you know, I work for a global IT company. I have assigned important project and ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, regarding, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 719.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60897435897 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57825421672 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6087141485 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.3076923077 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182167409585 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672500497808 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479276663088 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108681686208 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703057582029 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.57 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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