Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Although, it is true that technological devices such as mobile phone and security cameras are useful to monitoring public activity. But some times some people are unaware of this that they are under surveillance. In my opinion, I think that, as every coin has two sides, it also have some drawbacks but it has more benefits then drawbacks.
To start with, the existing of security camera and cell phone tracking brings many advantages for mankind in this contemporary era if they are used in proper way. In other words, use of these types of devices make easy to protect society for the crime departments. Also it would be easy for them to collect evidence against crime and to prevent the crime from happening. Which automatically reduce the rate of crime.
Moreover, with the help of tracking system authorities can trace people and also they can catch the criminals by tracking their cell phones direction. For example, nowadays, the global positioning system is used to find out the location of criminals. Even using tracking technology people can easily find their technological gadgets when they lost it.
However, it is unfavourable to trace people because they are unaware of it. Some people believe that it is also against human rights and freedom where people should have their own privacy. Furthermore, there are also chances to misuse of their data by authorised person. For instance, the aubtorised person can sale the data of them to another companies or other countries to earn money.
In conclusion, I think that, the government have right to trace them but they also need to take care of data of their residence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99270072993 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62693621206 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565693430657 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2638571165 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.2 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5333333333 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252748349043 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801505113373 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066172610598 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124661626881 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598808416683 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.