some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Recently, the phenomenon of environmental problems and its corresponding impacts have sparked a long-running dispute. In this regard, apart from the importance of various animals and plants extinction around the world, others are of the opinion that they should take into account more significant environmental concerns. In my view, such issues as climate change, global warming, and soil erosion have higher priorities than other issues.
Undoubtedly, climate change causes miscellaneous effects on human’s life. Turning green areas into arid lands or the change of weather conditions permanently may lead to the lack of food resources and making more population hungry. In addition, global warming is another issue which threatens humanity. Through, rising the average temperature of the world, glaciers of poles will be melted and so level of seas goes up remarkably. Thus, vast amounts of regions will be submerged under oceans.
What’s more, the existence of mankind depends on agriculture, particularly gaining foods via cultivation of plants. Nowadays, various nations around the four corners of the globe are struggling with soil deterioration. Consequently, far less food is produced than few decades ago. Meanwhile, utilization of chemical fertilizers contributes to erosion of soils swiftly.
On the other hand, we shouldn’t lose sight of other opinions. They point out that plants and animals are disappearing regularly. Individuals witness elimination of several beneficial species, like Iranian lions or even tiny worms which is useful to do with soils. Moreover, scientists have turned on the red alarms of deforestation and unrooting of huge trees. In their view, plants are the Earth’s lungs which are ill already. Hence, researchers should come up with innovative treatments to cure the priceless lungs.
To sum up, despite compelling arguments on both sides, I opt to support the idea that concerns like climate change and soil erosion are far more important than the loss of species. Imagine, in not far distant future, global warming converts our sweet green home, the Earth, into a dried, red, and burning planet like Mars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... its corresponding impacts have sparked a long-running dispute. In this regard, apart from the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, apart from, in addition, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88473716668 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665662650602 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.041853104 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15023850191 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358314235521 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474208884335 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755204230454 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668032529841 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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