In spite of the significant advances made in the field of agriculture many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem ?
In the 21 century, the world agriculture scene is diminishing by multinational corporations.However, the flabbergasting reality of the current world shows that millions of individuals suffer from food scarcity. There are umpteen number of reasons behind this phenomena as well as there are several remain lim however, the flabbergasting reality of the current world shows that millions of individuals suffer from food scarcity. There are umpteen number of reasons behind this phenomena as well as there are several remedies which I will discuss in upcoming paragraph.
To commence with, there are myriad now of reasons that people still go hungry in contemporary era because many countries want to increase capitalism in economy. Firstly there is increase in population also all over the world so that people suffer from mall nearest and country spend much more money on new inventions like on technology and different types of technique technical machines. Moreover many richest countries countries share new technology with other country.Secondly, deforestation is proliferating day by day for other purpose which result to lack of land for agriculture so that people cannot grow Superior quality of crops mostly the reduction in yield because of climate change.
On the other hand, there are ample number of solution for agriculture field will advance in every nation. Firstly, country should stop h on the other hand, there are ample number of solution for agriculture field will advance in every nation. Firstly, country should stop hoarding Of the food because food play an app in dec of the food because food play an app indispensable role in everyone’s life Because without food people cannot live long life. Further more which is the richest country should that they do share new technology with other countries then every country will grow food. For instance in because without food people cannot live long life. Further more which is the richest country should that they do share new technology with other countries then every country will grow food. For instance in In Africa has not a lot of land for growing crops sometime they eat mud and biscuits whenever they do not have food for eating. Nowadays in every country people grow crops with the help of super seeds which is not good for human and environment, if rich country think they climate change impact on only poor country then do you think totally wrong because climate changing effect for every country.
To conclude, according to this argument countries should that they share every technology with other because if every country will be together then no people will face shortage of food in for the life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2256.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 437.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16247139588 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70247162801 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.41647597254 0.561755894193 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 699.3 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.7116592622 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.4 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1333333333 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0987741254742 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490442589415 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388175035313 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769292071778 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240637243094 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.