It is observed that shopping on the internet is increasing in its popularity. Why is it so? Is it a good or bad development?
In today’s world, with the advent of technology, the acceptance of online shopping is rapidly increasing day-by-day. As every coin has two sides, even this development has its own merits and demerits. In this essay, I will discuss why buying products via the internet has gained its popularity and the pros and cons of this development.
To commence with, the three main reasons for the vogue of e-commerce among the general public. The first and foremost is that people want to stay at home, and they can order anything with the help of the internet because online shopping can be done anywhere at any time around the world. Secondly, e-commerce gives a wide range of options to explore the products of our interest whereas commercial market shops have limited options available. Thirdly, some of the e-commerce websites offer cash delivery options. Consequently, consumers are not worried about sharing the details of credit cards online. Thus, shopping online has become a common practice nowadays.
There are numerous benefits to shop online instead of going to markets for buying products. Chiefly, the reduction of traffic congestion on roads and overcrowding in shopping malls. Moreover, it has provided tremendous choices of items listed on e-commerce platforms. However, sometimes the quality of a product as mentioned online was not fulfill by some of the manufacturers as they only want to make money instead of selling good quality items online. But, this problem has been solved by e-commerce companies by providing feedback options and returning policy options on each product that is listed on their websites.
To recapitulate, in consonance with my perception, the rising demand for shopping on the internet is a good development for society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 12.0772626932 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1373.03311258 105% => OK
No of words: 282.0 270.72406181 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13120567376 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60984476043 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585106382979 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 419.366225166 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 13.0662251656 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 282.0 21.2450331126 1327% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.2860985944 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1447.0 110.228320801 1313% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 282.0 21.698381199 1300% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 96.0 7.06452816374 1359% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195491040398 0.272083759551 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195491040398 0.0996497079465 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137675380585 0.162205337803 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855365281756 0.0443174109184 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 143.7 13.3589403974 1076% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -214.75 53.8541721854 -399% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 5.55761589404 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 113.3 11.0289183223 1027% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.95 12.2367328918 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.88 8.42419426049 260% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 76.0 63.6247240618 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 10.7273730684 513% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 114.8 10.498013245 1094% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 55.0 11.2008830022 491% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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