Many people these days travel far for work or spend more hours working. Does this trend have more advantages or disadvantages? What do you think about work-life balance?
Indubitably, it has been observed that there are drastic changes in the working style from past many years. Nowadays, not only a person has to travel far distances from their homes to work, but also have to spend long hours in offices to earn promotion and incentives and get a credit of their work. However, it is a mixed bad of boon and bane.
Apparently, working longer hours or traveling far for work holds a wide range of constructive benefits. To commence with the fact, that the person who is devoted to his or her job while working hard to earn credit by having a promotion and excellent wages could only be done by working overtime in their offices. Secondly, it provides an easy direction to grow in their career. Thirdly, employees who are dedicated to their jobs at their companies while spending additional hours of employment will eventually rise to higher positions at their companies. In other words, an employee could become a business partner because of working late, and hard at their firms. Conversely, this kind of devotion at work has given several destructive benefits. Chiefly, if a person will be devoted to his professional career, eventually it will harm his personal life. To illustrate, an individual who is working more hours at their firm just because of earning name and a higher salary eventually gets affected by their social relationships in their lives. Apart from this, working late in offices adversely affects to the human body because, in this modern world, every person is working on computers and sitting on computers and paying more attention to work could increase our stress, weight and also affects our vision.
Furthermore, in my opinion, the work-life balance is simply defined as a healthy balance between a personal and professional life. The possible solution to maintain this kind of balance between work life and other aspects of a person's life could be only done by spectacular time management skills. I think time management plays a vital role in handling work-life balance.
To conclude, as every coin has two sides, the ongoing trend of working late in offices or traveling far for work has pros and cons in an individual's life. However, this could be temporarily solved by maintain a good time table in their daily life, so the balance will be maintain in professional and personal life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...etween work life and other aspects of a persons life could be only done by spectacular ...
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Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ng far for work has pros and cons in an individuals life. However, this could be temporaril...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, conversely, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, apart from, as to, i think, kind of, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1961.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95202020202 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66773179486 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512626262626 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0513033249 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.352941176 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2941176471 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1176470588 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340872063348 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124459606129 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837115146844 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22854252863 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00647640135532 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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