You have organized the 90th birthday party of your relative and invited elderly guests also. It was a successful party. Write a letter to the hotel manager, to provide the feedback:
In your letter, you should tell:
when the party was
why it was successful
thank for a staff member who was really helpful.
Dear Mr. Williams,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude towards you and your well-experienced staff while preparing the wonderful arrangements for my grandmother's 90th birthday party.
We had a birthday event celebrated on the 27th of May 2021 at your place. The reason behind the party went successfully because of your well-served hospitality. You have taken all the needs and desires such as the guest list, selecting the right kind of food, cake preparation, birthday game activities for older people which we wanted to make the event rememberable for my grandmother and the guests.
With such kind of planning, it was a challenging task for me to decide and choose the right things for the event because I never had this kind of experience while organizing a birthday party of my grandmother's and her friends. I was unable to prepare and organize the activities require to organize the event. By god's grace, one of your staff members who was handling my event came forward with wonderful suggestions to make the birthday party successful. Due to your staff member, I got praises from my family members for organizing a wonderful birthday party.
Therefore, I am so grateful to you and your well-experienced staff members for making the birthday event successful. Also, if there will be any occasion upcoming in my family, I would be happy to book your hotel because your first-class hospitality.
I am looking forward to hearing about my shared feedback from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 288, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'organizing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: organizing
...are and organize the activities require to organize the event. By gods grace, one of your s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, while, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 937.175257732 138% => OK
No of words: 252.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11904761905 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97738600327 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551587301587 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 290.88556701 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.5504241037 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270100974319 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105783060691 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385432916138 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139984362927 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415082425385 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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