Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In recent times, there is an ambivalent opinion about whether humans can gain any knowledge from history or not. In this essay, both views will be discussed and opinions will be given about this argument.
On the one hand, there is an increase in the number of people who stand by the opinion that nothing from history is adaptable to today's life, which can be explained for a host of reasons. First of all, it is undeniable to say that, in the past, most of the product-manufacturing procedures were human-required, whereas nowadays, those products are produced by automatic machines and manufacturing chains. Another remarkable justification for this side of the argument is that the concept of women staying at home and not having an opportunity to participate in the labor force and attain education is relatively obsolete compared to today's changes in the structure of society. On this account, I believe that the contribution of women to the financial state and education progress is equally important as their male counterparts.
On the other hand, it is also history that can cultivate human life. One of the most significant and advantageous impacts it has on society is that people can learn a range of lessons from past mistakes. For example, Thomas Edison failed nearly a hundred times before he succeeded in inventing the light bulb. Furthermore, it is true that, by valuing history and take a deep look into this broad field, people can cultivate their minds for the better. A good case in point is that leaders nowadays use their knowledge, which can be attained through observing and analyzing history, to cultivate the eloquence of their speech and also to further develop their decision-making skills.
For those reasons, I believe that history can both be unworthy of the changes in today's world but also worthless for its unmeasurable reservoir of knowledge it can offer for society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, so, whereas, for example, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05379746835 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94083046378 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563291139241 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.555469903 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.083333333 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21773366244 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836000810192 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564805115487 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137900185872 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276508494576 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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