Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? all jobs should provide some opportunity for physical exercise.
Technological changes are accelerating, and they have the largest impact on workplaces. Nowadays most of the jobs get done by computers or similar smart devices in which requires long hours of sitting in front of them. Additionally, the more developed a society is, the longer hour of work is needed so one can meet all the expectations, therefore, maintaining of work-life balance can become a struggle to an individual.
Companies providing opportunities for physical activities during working hours can be helpful and contribute to their employee’s satisfaction because they feel that they have accomplished more than just doing what their job requires and they are staying healthy. As an example, Microsoft which is a tech company and that means it is required for its employees to sit at their computers a lot, has implemented 10 mins stretching reminders on their calendar, as a result they go on breaks and can stretch their legs. Accordingly, employees who are performing these workouts are less likely to suffer from any kind of muscle stiffness or pain which can diminish productivity or increase the chances of them taking sick time off. Even though, some might assume these small workout breaks are reducing the working hours, I think they can influence the outcome positively.
Additionally, if you are a busy individual who need to work more than 8 hours a day, and you care about your physical health, having a stable work-life balance can sometimes be problematic. Hence, possibilities for working out in work hours can help with keeping the balance. For example, in order for me to get my regular exercise I need to get up at 5:00am everyday so I can workout before I start working, however, if I knew I can schedule something in the middle of the day with the rest of my co-workers, I could get more sleep and also did not need to worry about the fact that I am the only one not working in the middle of the day.
As a conclusion, in my opinion working out even for a small time, specially if it is offered from the job can reduce one’s stress levels, increase the satisfaction and the feeling of productivity and this can result in happier employees therefore more jobs get done leading to more profit for the company.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: CAN_WORKOUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can work out'?
Suggestion: can work out
... need to get up at 5:00am everyday so I can workout before I start working, however, if I k...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, for example, i think, kind of, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1864.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84155844156 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85580133795 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550649350649 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.1344086022 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.9399398895 48.9658058833 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.454545455 100.406767564 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 20.6045352989 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 5.45110844103 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128903131021 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490632165145 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393548643203 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761315945498 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246432594292 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 11.7677419355 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.0537634409 159% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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