Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree.
Discuss both these views and give own opinion.
In recent years, the concern of information privacy has gained a great deal of public attention in the community. When it comes to job applications, some people feel it is inconvenient to reveal the personal information about their hobbies and interests, or their marriage status. In my opinion, even though it has some drawbacks, its advantages are more significant.
On the one hand, some applicants feel uncomfortable to show their personal information to employers. First, this information can result in biases during the time of interviews as well as how employers evaluate the candidates. Some managers prefer recruiting single people as they might have more free time and innovations than married ones, however, this is not always true. Second, this sharing can possibly get rid of some potential employees who are result-oriented people. In fact, there are the number of fulfillers who spend most of their time on climbing the higher ladders in their career and forget their personal interest. Therefore, if using this information to determine if they are a good fit or not, it will have some negative effects.
On the other hand, many people think it is necessary to share personal information when applying for jobs for some reasons. They believe that this information can help interviewers simply identify whether that candidate can be a good fit for a position or not. For example, hiring manager can consider how long a potential candidate can work for company throughout their married statuses or their interests. According to some online researches, married people are more likely to stay at a company longer than the single ones. In addition, there are some jobs that require other skill sets such as art, photography, and drawing. If a person does not have these interests, it might be irrelevant for the job requirements.
In conclusion, although sharing personal information online is not an optimal solutions, it perhaps helps employers choose good candidates for their vacancies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'can'.
Suggestion: can
...s not always true. Second, this sharing can possibly get rid of some potential employees who...
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Line 3, column 446, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...bly get rid of some potential employees who are result-oriented people. In fact, there ...
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Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'solution'?
Suggestion: solution
...al information online is not an optimal solutions, it perhaps helps employers choose good...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24844720497 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89488306852 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549689440994 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.4383791402 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.625 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.4322239968 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136050234438 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721685514033 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245210680661 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884562662712 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.