Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that these problems cannot be solved if individuals do not take actions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Opinions differ as to whether it is arduous or not for individuals to tackle environmental degradation. Admittedly, both views are reasonable with its merits; however, I tend to be convinced by the latter idea considering that there are many effortless ways for dwellers to protect the environment, in addition to the long-run betterment engendered by the cooperation of both the government and each citizen.
Rationally, as a myriad of troublesome problems are rather impossible for denizens to solve, some reckon that environmental preservation is rather horrendous for individuals. To put it simply, had it not been for the government, coping with green issues would have been unfeasible without a doubt. Salient examples can be seen in weather catastrophes such as global warming, violent storms, prolonged droughts, and the like, which in turn suggest that it is the politicians and environmentalists’ duties to preserve the environment.
Conversely, a reason which convinces me to reject the former idea is that every individual needs to take responsibility. There are various simple ways for dwellers to protect their surroundings such as reusing, recycling goods, purchasing more energy-efficient household items, and even planting more plants and trees in their gardens. With the cooperation of citizens and governments, everyone, together, can diminish green issues. To illustrate, if farmers follow the government’s restrictions and no longer burn forests for agricultural purposes, the problem of climate change will be successfully mitigated.
In conclusion, people have rationale to find tackling environmental degradation onerous. Despite this, I still support the opinion of individuals’ action-taking since it is more advantageous and aims for the long-run betterment.
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- Some people think that language should be taught in small classes while other people think the number of students in a language class does not matter Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
Opinions differ as to whether it is arduous or not for individuals to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, however, if, so, still, well, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78867924528 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.48882975685 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645283018868 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6167340095 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.454545455 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214175406266 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766357145558 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536924207455 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12895009442 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333931911771 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.61 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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