These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
It is true that men are increasingly likely to take on the role of househusband, while their wives take on financial duty. There could be several reasons for this, and I consider it to be a very positive trend.
There are two main reasons why many fathers tend to do the duty belonged to women in the past while mothers go out to earn money. Firstly, doing house-works and looking after babies are much easier now compared to those were in the past, so man can handle this well. For example, nowadays we are able to use cloth nappies to keep babies clean without taking the smell any more. In addition, a large number of high educated women qualified to attain a well-paid job that could bring them a highly salary. As a result, they could meet their financial requirement.
In my view, the advancement of this trend is definitely positive. First of all, children could gain more knowledge from additional home schooling when fathers stay at home, so they could have a bright future. Moreover, young crimes rate could be decrease as a result of the closer relationship between fathers and children. In addition, mothers who have good jobs play a major role in economics as well as society. For instance, there are a rising in the number of women working in hospitals, universities or even in business, and their contribution is significant.
In conclusion, there are various factors could cause the trend that fathers handle house-work and take care of children while mothers are the breadwinners in their families, I believe that these developments are desirable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...taking the smell any more. In addition, a large number of high educated women qualified to attain...
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Message: You used an adverb ('highly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('salary') instead of another adjective.
...n a well-paid job that could bring them a highly salary. As a result, they could meet their fin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87313432836 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6905753682 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615671641791 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4434004388 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.461538462 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3846153846 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420459711023 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120001328473 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818917971811 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244437292408 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329366739885 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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