Claim: In any situation, the best way to persuade other people is to present them with facts and statistics rather than with emotional arguments.
Reason: Facts are objective, so they are more persuasive than subjective appeals.
Individuality in mindsets and thought processes is the nature's gift given to mankind. Considering this, it is but natural that we have conflicts and differences of opinion among ourselves. I partially agree to the statement that in any situation, the best way to persuade other people is to present them with facts and statistics rather than with emotional arguments. According to me, there are numerous different kinds of situations that we face everyday, and each one of them cannot be handled in the same manner.
The way to persuade people must be decided acording to the conflict at hand. If the problem is a technical one, then facts and statistics will definitely help lure people to your side. For instance, if a decision is to be made regarding which smartphone to buy, presenting people with information about optimum battery life, memory, and speed of a certain brand of phone, will make them lean towards buying it. Thus, for situations where no emotional decision needs to be made, it is easier to convince people taking the aid of facts and statistics.
On the second hand, let us consider decisions where personal choices are to be made. For example, if a couple is thinking about having children, do you think it is possible to convince them otherwise, using facts? It will not matter to them the factuals about how many children are born everyday, and how the population of the world is growing substantially. Similarly, you cannot persuade someone to like a movie, or a song, or a painting on the basis of statistics regarding how many people have liked it, or how many people haven't. Hence, in such situation, facts and statistics may not be the right way for persuasion.
It is true that facts are objective, and they show what is true and what is not. Nonetheless, they cannot always be more persuasive than subjective appeals. Sometimes, you have to take a good look at the bunch you are trying to persuade. Each individual has their own way with the things, and each one needs to be convinced in their own way. It may happen that you can persuade a 40-year-old business man regarding his business strategies showing him graphs and tables. But will you be able to convince a 4-year-old child to not eat candy, showing him statistics about dental hygiene?
Though mathematical approach is a very good tool in any dispute, it is not always the right one. It is very important to consider the people you are having conflicts with, and persuade them in their own way. Only then, you increase the changes to getting what you want from the conversation.
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- Claim In any situation the best way to persuade other people is to present them with facts and statistics rather than with emotional arguments Reason Facts are objective so they are more persuasive than subjective appeals 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 369, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...s rather than with emotional arguments. According to me, there are numerous different kinds of ...
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Line 1, column 396, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'numerous'.
Suggestion: numerous
...l arguments. According to me, there are numerous different kinds of situations that we face everyd...
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Line 1, column 448, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ferent kinds of situations that we face everyday, and each one of them cannot be handled...
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Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ctuals about how many children are born everyday, and how the population of the world is...
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Line 5, column 528, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...eople have liked it, or how many people havent. Hence, in such situation, facts and st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, may, nonetheless, regarding, second, similarly, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2140.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 444.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81981981982 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69482711398 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509009009009 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 660.6 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.77640449438 563% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3590044597 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2727272727 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.59090909091 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295094132953 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848190025785 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115248467288 0.0758088955206 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167772853756 0.150359130593 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745741171328 0.0667264976115 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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