films were produced by big companies in the past, but today people are able to make a film. Do you think this trend is positive or negative?
In this day and age, people are inclined to produce a film themselves or with low-budget equipment. However, in the past, the film was made by multiple departments of a film agency. I opine that this is a good sign in the growth of the cutting-edge society
There are many compelling reasons as to why I lean towards the merits of produce film alone. On the one hand, it is the best bet to set aside your income for further investment in life. As a matter of fact, this technological century enables you to purchase video equipment from multiple professional brands such as Canon, Nikon,...due to its prevalence among the consumer’s society. On top of that, learning recording skill is now far from difficult owing to the popularity of YouTubers that give advice to the audience on how to make a film themselves; moreover, there are a number of manual guideline books so that it is easily accessible for the one pursuing professional film making career.
On the other hand, that is the best method to immerse in the creative mind as well as to develop the unknown aptitude of yourself. I contend that managing yourself to do such things can broaden your horizon as you learn from thousands of open resources via social media platforms, websites, or your relatives’ experiences. Self-study in terms of making a film helps you to recognize your strength in this field as well as to build a solid basis of knowledge. These experiences give you a sufficient amount of time to reflect on your work or just simply indulging in your field of interest.
In conclusion, I believe that making a film on your own without the others is a positive advancement which is extremely appropriate for people to learn and discover, especially the youngsters who always seeking creativity. Given this situation, it seems that one should raise his/her own awareness of the designation of “ making film” in particular and “ invention” in general.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, well, as to, in conclusion, in general, in particular, such as, as a matter of fact, as well as, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88217522659 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89937674059 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567975830816 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.3772127196 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.666666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5833333333 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0833333333 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279315757757 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993893799933 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695327405778 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172278230184 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560037954862 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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