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In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a
hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?

Irrefutably

, in contemporary era e-commerce is become a vital trend in all

human life

. The e-commerce is

must

require for fashion and show off things.

However

, in the 19th century buying things was not necessary for the pupil's. This essay shed light on

pros

and cons of shopping habit in

before

life and

today

's soul. To

begin

with, there are

plenty

of shopping malls and branded shop available in fewer price and less distance although

people

are

purchase

frequently

cloths, grocery, furniture, utility of

house

etc.

Moreover

, pupils

make

habit

of buying things in daily

basis, and

they are up to date in running soul. The world crowd become a more sophisticated compare to slow and steady of past life. Crowd are going to street

activity, and

they

show

different

varieties for their needs

moreover

, they enjoy varieties taste of foods and enjoy with family every day.

For example

, the malls and branded shop give better discount on a

some

segment.

Moreover

, pupils

buy

more and more for their better

lives

. On the other side, the

old

generation

was believed

in preserved their things

carefully

although they were not

bought

something in weekly routines.

Furthermore

, they

thought

in save money and save our tradition.

Generally

humankind

bought

something in intervals of

turn

and at that

turn

malls and shops unavailable

people

not

bought

something in sufficient rate. To exemplify, shopper dose not gave a discounts on

some

segments

because

lack resource of factories and

companies

. The business

man

can not produce sufficient rate products

because

raw material price was high and that

generation

machinates not produces

enough

good

for human. In final reckoning, I

strongly

approach that the activity habit is much better than interval

turn

of purchasing and

mankind

update themselves in

today

's generation.

People

save money and

easily

collect their needs.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1979.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 6.42532467532 5.12529762239 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57887628304 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594155844156 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0755175439 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.411764706 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1176470588 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 28.0 4.38176352705 639% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 68.0 5.01903807615 1355% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.086020601426 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0266736759611 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0253809638101 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0169020816249 0.151304729494 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281401660409 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.72 12.4159519038 159% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for example

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