Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In my opinion, cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world are helping the countries grow. However, it is very difficult to control the cities effectively with growing number of population. In this case, the government of the country needs to be fair and work with ethics without any corruption. The government should have very strict rules in case of theft and robbery. The number of population can help of increase economical growth, in Bangladesh there are many garments to help and support the poor families and help them to earn money through working in factories. These workers are helping own country to grow economically. In this case, the government should ensure safe working environment for all the workers and ensure higher wages for the workers for motivation. Cosmopolitan cities have higher opportunities for employment. For example, Dhaka has many big companies and provides many employment opportunities rather than other cities in Bangladesh. Lots of people from different districts migrate to dhaka for this reason and it has made this very crowded. As a result, it has lead to uncomfortable traffic james on the city road. In this case, the government should ensure proper and safe roads with many number of flyovers as early as possible in Bangladesh to control traffic jams and save time of people living in the city.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 430, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...mber of population can help of increase economical growth, in Bangladesh there are many ga...
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Line 1, column 1226, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'many numbers'.
Suggestion: many numbers
...hould ensure proper and safe roads with many number of flyovers as early as possible in Ban...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for example, in fact, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09009009009 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75272035653 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536036036036 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0006172797 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314597291749 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114734751018 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753083764115 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314597291749 0.151304729494 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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