Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the day and age, it is thought by some people that television has hindered the contact among family and friends. Although I agree that, this type of media brings people closer together for some reasons.
On the one hand, TV set has several negative impacts on maintaining communication among people. First, it is worth considering that television shifts the focus of life among family members. For example, during dinner, parents and children tend to watch TV as an alternative to the dialogue with others, resulting in a decrease in the affection of family members. Another point worth noting is that TV program keeps individuals indoor instead of going out to play. In other words, when it comes to favorite shows, people often reject the invitation of friends in order to stay home, which consequently causes a crack in the relationship.
On the other hand, this kind of home entertainment also acts as an incentive for the interaction of human beings. To begin with, news on television creates more common topics for people to discuss. For instance, viewing quiz shows together will give individuals a good chance to debate the questions with others, which not only helps friends feel more connected but also strengthens the association. In addition, watching tv helps individuals solve the problem in their relationships. According to a psychologist, watching comedies about friends or family would help couples feel more exuberant, putting the trials and tribulations behind.
In conclusion, although television has a detrimental effect on communication among people, there are several advantages of TV in connecting them. Individuals should sustain an equitable balance between television and liaison so as to reinforce a comfortable society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 225, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... balance between television and liaison so as to reinforce a comfortable society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31654676259 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94787629303 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611510791367 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8200256072 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.571428571 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7857142857 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149270468489 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526896964292 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394964818274 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092087699684 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137096752777 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.