Question
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Recreational activities have significant importance in one's life, in the modern age and day, it is becoming more popular. This essay will discuss the motivation for people to adopt a hobby, furthermore the positive impact of this phenomenon on one's life and on the society.
To begin with, having recreational activities is getting popular in this contemporary world, there can be a wide range of activities that people opt as a hobby. Some of the famous hobbies are: sports, reading, gardening, watching movies and TV, surfing intenret, playing online games, and many other similar activities. All of these activities require time and in some cases engagement also.
Having a hobby has plethora of benefits; however, two of the main advantages will be discussed here: First and foremost, in opting a hobby the individual really enjoys doing that specific activity and it brings happiness and joy. In this stressfull world, where people are sorrounded by hectic work routines and negative news, having a hobby is nothing less than a blessing, and it can have a meditational impact. Reading a book while sitting on the coach can take someone to a fantasy world and one will forget the challenges that life offers. Secondly, most of the hobbies help in improving the knowledge-base or physical fitness, depending on the nature of the hobby, for example, playing football can give an athletic physique that is good for health, while reading books is a mental exercise and improves intellect and communication skills.
Simlarly, there are certain benefits to the society if people have hobbies, the aggregate knowledge base and health of the society will improve. One other benefit is that people who have common interest will bond with eacht oher, which will bring coherence in the society.
To conclude, the benefits of having hobbies are apparent, it brings mental and physical fitness, as well as, improve the social bonding among people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...tivities have significant importance in ones life, in the modern age and day, it is ...
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Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
... activities that people opt as a hobby. Some of the famous hobbies are: sports, reading, ga...
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Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cases'' or 'case's'?
Suggestion: cases'; case's
...ese activities require time and in some cases engagement also. Having a hobby has ...
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Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...quire time and in some cases engagement also. Having a hobby has plethora of bene...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, as well as, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17405063291 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69445440149 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588607594937 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.364135503 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.25 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126137300535 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491636683082 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432173021953 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069452348434 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326503649304 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.