Imagine you could improve the town where you live by changing one important thing about it. Which of the following would you choose to do?
Build additional parks
Construct more libraries
Improve public transportation
Cities need constant improvements in many fields. People prioritize one project over another, like building recreational spaces, increasing public libraries, or improving transportation. I would choose to enhance the government transportation system over other options. I feel this way for three reasons which I will explore in the essay.
First of all, public transportation reduces the air and noise pollution in the city. We all face the hazardous smell of gas and the constant honking of vehicles in the street. Gas particles which emit from the combustion engine of cars are insidious. It affects our lungs and brains and causes diseases as extreme as cancer. The sound of horns also leads to migraine pain which ultimately leads to depression. In contrast, public transport is a highly efficient way of transportation. Fuel consumption per person for subway and buses is meager in comparison to private vehicles. The noise almost leads to zero. My personal example is a compelling argument for this. A few years back, I lived in Austin, where people usually prefer to use private cars. Every day, I used to stuck in traffic. As a result, gases and noises started affecting my health. Consequently, my health deteriorated. On medical advice, I moved to Delaware, where most people use public transport, and the city is very much free from noise and air pollutants. As a result, my health condition improved significantly.
Second, Investment in public transport leads to a better economy for the citizen. Public transportation is much cheaper than the private one. Improved public transport infrastructure provides more opportunities to marginalized and poor people of the society. They might not be able to open a shop or get a job in the far area from their locality due to the cost of private vehicles. However, enhance infrastructure enables people to pursue economic opportunities without considering the distance. For example, I once rejected a better job offer because it was very far from my home. The only private cabs could reach there. Due to cost consideration, I was not able to pursue my best interest. Now that place is connected to the city metro line. If I got an offer from there, I would accept it.
Third, Improving public transport leads to having better family relations and bonds. Public transport like subway and city buses aren't struck in regular city traffic. These have a dedicated lane in the roads which reduces the transportation time significantly. People commuting hours reduction leads to more time available to everyone. This gain in time means people spend more time with their friends and family. Their bondings with one another improve. For example, When my dad switched from cab to subway. It results in the reduction of half an hour in commute. Hence we used to have more time in the evening. We used to go for an evening walk in the nearest park. This made our bond stronger.
In conclusion, Enhancing the Infrastructure is the one project which I would prefer over other suggestions. This is because it reduces air pollution, makes the economy better, and improves people's personal lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, hence, however, if, second, so, third, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2623.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 516.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76609204519 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9223231868 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52519379845 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 825.3 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 42.0 20.6003584229 204% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.455767354 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.4523809524 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2857142857 20.6045352989 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 19.0 4.88709677419 389% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166981077437 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378715470659 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398106693362 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106454622921 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282064925981 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 58.1214874552 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 86.8835125448 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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