The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams shows how to created bricks in contruction industry which were used all over the world
There are seven steps to manufacting the brick.Beginning by collecting clay near the sea,lakes this is the main steps to create bricks and packaging them for manufacturing.
Look at the first and the second steps ,they’re using the digger machine to collect all of the clay existed near the sand, then they use the metal grid to classify the the hard clay and the soft clay to make sure the quality wont be mixed togheter .the soft clay will get to mixing with the water to make it sticky ,after that they pouring all of the clay that mixed with water into the mold to shaping it,or they can just form the clay into a long rectangle ,and they will cute the rectangle into brick pieces by the wire .The next two step is to take out the product inside the mold and dry it ,then they will put it into the high temperature to make it harder and safer in buildings.
The final steps is to packaging all of the final product and manufacturing them to sells all over the world
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'show'.
Suggestion: show
The diagrams shows how to created bricks in contruction in...
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Line 2, column 48, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Beginning
...re seven steps to manufacting the brick.Beginning by collecting clay near the sea,lakes t...
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Line 2, column 89, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , lakes
...eginning by collecting clay near the sea,lakes this is the main steps to create bricks...
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Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... Look at the first and the second steps ,they’re using the digger machine to coll...
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Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...’re using the digger machine to collect all of the clay existed near the sand, then they u...
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Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...hen they use the metal grid to classify the the hard clay and the soft clay to make sur...
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Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...hen they use the metal grid to classify the the hard clay and the soft clay to make sur...
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Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... sure the quality wont be mixed togheter .the soft clay will get to mixing with th...
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Line 3, column 315, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... mixing with the water to make it sticky ,after that they pouring all of the clay ...
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Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...make it sticky ,after that they pouring all of the clay that mixed with water into the mol...
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Line 3, column 406, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , or
...d with water into the mold to shaping it,or they can just form the clay into a long...
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Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...just form the clay into a long rectangle ,and they will cute the rectangle into br...
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Line 3, column 523, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... rectangle into brick pieces by the wire .The next two step is to take out the pro...
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Line 3, column 524, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ectangle into brick pieces by the wire .The next two step is to take out the produc...
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Line 3, column 595, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t the product inside the mold and dry it ,then they will put it into the high temp...
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Line 4, column 33, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...dings. The final steps is to packaging all of the final product and manufacturing them to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41708542714 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28687940846 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537688442211 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 22.4926829268 293% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 244.345383968 43.030603864 568% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 293.0 112.824112599 260% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.3333333333 22.9334400587 289% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101375554466 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841591126494 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751771608656 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883585071594 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641397024989 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.6 13.2329268293 246% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 29.87 61.2550243902 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 10.3012195122 248% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.24 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.4329268293 236% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.4 10.9970731707 258% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.