Some people think that because children find subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult, they ought to be optional instead of compulsory.To what extent do you agree?
Knowledge is like a candle that burns and give light to anyone around it; however, many people argue that subjects like mathematics and philosophy should not be compulsory in schools as they should be optional. I am fully agreed with the statement and opine that interest should be the key factor for children to decide what they want to learn.
First and foremost, interest is recalled as the liking toward anything and should be considered while choosing the course to learn. Owing to this, a passion for learning among the children is ignited. Not only they will learn but will also find harmony in life. As a result, the learner will get the profession they desire in no time. For instance, a survey conducted by Japan's child welfare association shows that students who chose their preferred course in their early learning period are more successful economically than those who took the subjects out of their interest. Needless to say, schooling should not be bounded to disinterest.
Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some more merits but prominent one is brewing of confidence among the teens regarding their choices they have made in their lives. Because of this, a feel of righteousness is nurtured in the students which lead them to become a leader to be followed. Moreover, their quick decision-making can turn them into an influential figure who can influence the society with ease. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of this trend.
To recapitulate, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to conclusion that the benefits of choosing the subjects among children with their interest as a key factor are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, while, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.025 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72477063255 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592857142857 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0630524967 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.230769231 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17070951516 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558422882207 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511506943108 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101753797452 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739543762017 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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