You recently attended a conference and you would like to give a presentation about the information you gained by attending the conference.
Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter:
describe what type of presentation you have in mind
what topics it would cover and how long it would take
who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted
Dear Sir,
I am writing in regard with the recent conference on Bamboo Structure Design which I happened to attend in Goa. I believe that I would want to share my experience and knowledge which I gained at this conference.
Although I have started collaborating on all the information for PowerPoint Presentation, I would like to get a formal consent to present this in our office. Through this presentation, I would like to share the importance of Bamboo as a structure that could be beneficial for our clients.
Since the topic could be really vast, I would not like to bore the attendees and would keep the presentation short for 15mins. I would like to present vital information on topics like the use of bamboo, structure stability, cost-efficiency and how would it protect our environment. This would help the team to gain knowledge and use it for Zero-Energy buildings for the environment.
All our office staff who really want to update their knowledge for this topic should attend this presentation irrespective of their designation. I would prefer to conduct this presentation in our conference room so that the audience could easily view the presentation on-screen and take notes.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Adams Mcdonald
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 3.85567010309 467% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13526570048 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11712144851 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531400966184 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2843581262 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6363636364 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.909090909091 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263867402676 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111828981469 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529023048143 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15892126972 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499678003249 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.