The government should al;ow more funds for science
The government and ruling elites of any state or region back in 20th century were more focused towards acquiring of more and more lanes and they eventually did so but the concepts have changed in 21st century now everyone is concerned towards science and technology does future belongs to machines, I believe government should play a significant role in promoting science and a lot more fun sports development.
To begin with globalization has played significant role after World War Two the nations become aware that we can only deter others aggression with technology and science so they started investing in their technological sectors in order to become powerful fully stop science is extremely important because we are living in digital age where everything directly or indirectly connected with it.
In addition to it, everyone across the globe becomes aware of its necessity and importance when the world grapples with a deadly corona virus which was first started in China and later detected in other parts of the world during peak time each sector and industry were put under lock down in order to stop spread the virus only machines were working and some special robots were also working in developed world due to this each government should become more focused on it that future belongs to these robots because they are not susceptible to the virus.Furthermore the sitting super powers were in endeavoring to launch fifth generation that would lead more in more and more reliance on machines and this would also lead towards rise of artificial intelligence owing to this government should allocate more funds for science in order to maintain the pace.
Moreover science leads any nation towards growth and we have seen the economic boost and security in some core countries who invested more in science and now they are importing their technologies with a peripheral and semi Peripheral states in the world.
To conclude this, it is a matter of fact that science has come to stay end it would keep flourishing in future so government should keep its focus on its development because many scholars and think tank predicted that in future we could see new types of virus and the rise of the machines. Even in COVID-19 times we see new trend of electronic sports and daily medicines so government should be vigilant towards science.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 22.0 6.8 324% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 5.60731707317 535% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 3.97073170732 579% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 965.302439024 203% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 391.0 196.424390244 199% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00255754476 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 3.73543355544 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62819302276 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 106.607317073 195% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531969309463 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 283.868780488 222% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 22.4926829268 289% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 229.048514997 43.030603864 532% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 326.0 112.824112599 289% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.1666666667 22.9334400587 284% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.5 5.23603664747 239% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267566356007 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131947418923 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717998709717 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1455184437 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734758423285 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.7 13.2329268293 262% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.5 61.2550243902 9% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.6 10.3012195122 278% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.61 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.06136585366 130% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 40.7170731707 219% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.4329268293 258% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.9970731707 255% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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