Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Many people's opinions differ as to whether or not newspapers are the most convenient method to approach news both and information. While there are some strong supportive beliefs about more benefits of reading newspapers than other media, I hold a view that the different others could be a better way.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why people might argue that newspapers do play the most crucial role in learning news and information. First, a piece of information or news that is formally written in newspapers would be not only carefully checked but also verified, before they are transferred to the viewers' hand. In contrast, information or news on other media, such as Facebook, might not be covered with double-checking. Without any doubt, the viewers might tend to daily approach with thousands of violent images or spams on those kinds of media. Second, it is said that reading traditional newspapers could prevent the people's eyes from contacting with blue-light coming directly from electric equipment's screens. As a result, the readers could avoid eye diseases, for example, eye-short sightedness. Therefore, it is recognized that the viewers could gain many benefits from newspapers.
On the other hand, despite the above argument, I support the view that plenty of means of media would contribute more advantages than newspapers. If it is concerned with convenience and speed for approaching information and news, nothing could be compared with media from all accounts. While the viewers must wait at least a few of hour or a day later for reading the lastest news on newspapers, they could do approach those ones faster and more easily through means of media or communication. In addition, all news and information posted or published on media, like Facebook, are totally non-fee, which takes more advantages over one's on newspapers. Moreover, approaching news and information through media is likely to hardly require any cost of transferring. According to the national survey in 2018, the annual number of cutted trees is approximately 3,000 hectares in Vietnam, which is used for housing, wood manufacturing, and paper-making. By limiting daily use of production which is made from paper including traditional newspapers, people tend to protect their environment daily. Employing media to approach news instead of newspapers might be a wiser choice to make our environment greener and more friendly.
In conclusion, newspapers are a good method to read news, however I believe that other kinds of media could outweigh in the long term.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: WHETHER[4]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
Many peoples opinions differ as to whether or not newspapers are the most convenient meth...
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Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: THESE_ONES[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'those' instead.
Suggestion: those
...s on newspapers, they could do approach those ones faster and more easily through means of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, as to, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2159.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25304136253 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90547626339 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525547445255 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6403399336 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.944444444 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0555555556 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266679810161 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088172594724 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498670436863 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186859190619 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267458015046 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.